Dear SHikha mere blog mai maine ye kahi nahi likha ki mai jo post karti hu wo sab maine likha hia. even jin ko pata hai wo likhtay bhi hai ki poetry collection is good. so thats means ki wo maine nahi likha. i m not a poet but yes jiski poerty muje acchi lagti hai mai apnay log mai shamil karti hu kyu ki wo mere saath life time yaad bn kar raray. ye mai apni hobby ke liye karti hu.muje diary likhtay ka kafi shokh hai is liye poetry mai yaha save krti hu . so please aap bura mat maniye ki maine apnay naam se publish kiya hai . and if i hurt u in any way then i m sorry..
mai jaha se poety leti hu waha mai mention karti hu ha shayd kabh kabhi nahi kiya hoga. per is mai mera koi personal swath nahi hai. but sorry for my mistake muje ap ka naam likha chaiye tha. aagaye se khayal rakhugi.
janey itna kyon yaad ati ho janey itna kyon yaad ati ho jitna door ho jati utna hi yaad hamey ati ho janey needon mei kyon bas jati ho janey har pal yaad tujhey kyon karta hai janey mere sapno mei tum kyon ho chup jati ho janey itna kyon yaad ati ho janey itna kyon yaad ati ho
janey har rang mei tera hi rang dikhta kyon hai janey har tasverr par teri hi zalak kyon dikhti hai janey meri har dhakan par tera hi naam kyon likh hai janey itna kyon yaad ati ho janey itna kyon yaad ati ho
janey rah mei tum hi haat kyon thaam leti ho janey har muskil mei tumhi saath deti kyon ho janey meri har aarzo mei teri hi ibaadat chupi kyon hai
janey itna kyon yaad ati ho janey itna kyon yaad ati ho
May be.. Shayad, main hi kuch jyada expect karti hoon.. but, ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi.. Dil se kuch likha jaaye aur us par kisi aur ki mohar dekho toh kuch ajeeb lagta hai... Anyways, I know this is net world.. :) I just keep telling people whom I came across, to give the name of poet or poetess while mentioning their work on their blog.. This shows respect for something which you too love.. i.e. Writing, penning down your emotions.. and saving them.. :) Thanks for understanding, Dear.. :)
Thanks for your visit and valuable comments Idrish Ji... Well, this is all my original work, all written by me only... Hope you have find them worth reading for once... Do visit again...
Nice One, nice presentation..
ReplyDeleteDear SHikha
ReplyDeletemere blog mai maine ye kahi nahi likha ki mai jo post karti hu wo sab maine likha hia. even jin ko pata hai wo likhtay bhi hai ki poetry collection is good. so thats means ki wo maine nahi likha. i m not a poet but yes jiski poerty muje acchi lagti hai mai apnay log mai shamil karti hu kyu ki wo mere saath life time yaad bn kar raray. ye mai apni hobby ke liye karti hu.muje diary likhtay ka kafi shokh hai is liye poetry mai yaha save krti hu . so please aap bura mat maniye ki maine apnay naam se publish kiya hai .
and if i hurt u in any way then i m sorry..
mai jaha se poety leti hu waha mai mention karti hu ha shayd kabh kabhi nahi kiya hoga. per is mai mera koi personal swath nahi hai. but sorry for my mistake muje ap ka naam likha chaiye tha. aagaye se khayal rakhugi.
Palak
janey itna kyon yaad ati ho
ReplyDeletejaney itna kyon yaad ati ho
jitna door ho jati utna hi yaad hamey ati ho
janey needon mei kyon bas jati ho
janey har pal yaad tujhey kyon karta hai
janey mere sapno mei tum kyon ho chup jati ho
janey itna kyon yaad ati ho
janey itna kyon yaad ati ho
janey har rang mei tera hi rang dikhta kyon hai
janey har tasverr par teri hi zalak kyon dikhti hai
janey meri har dhakan par tera hi naam kyon likh hai
janey itna kyon yaad ati ho
janey itna kyon yaad ati ho
janey rah mei tum hi haat kyon thaam leti ho
janey har muskil mei tumhi saath deti kyon ho
janey meri har aarzo mei teri hi ibaadat chupi kyon hai
janey itna kyon yaad ati ho
janey itna kyon yaad ati ho
Wonderful lines.... I really love your shayri.. :)
ReplyDeleteNice One Shikha,
ReplyDeleteG8t,
God Bless[:)]
@ ManishChopra...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your visit and comments.. :)
Its ok.. Palak.. :)
ReplyDeleteMay be.. Shayad, main hi kuch jyada expect karti hoon.. but, ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi..
Dil se kuch likha jaaye aur us par kisi aur ki mohar dekho toh kuch ajeeb lagta hai...
Anyways, I know this is net world.. :) I just keep telling people whom I came across, to give the name of poet or poetess while mentioning their work on their blog.. This shows respect for something which you too love.. i.e. Writing, penning down your emotions.. and saving them.. :)
Thanks for understanding, Dear.. :)
Wow... That's so nice... Utkarsh..
ReplyDeleteThanks for your visit and lovely poetry.. :)
Very very good collection............forwarded this to someone special..........Thanks
ReplyDeleteThanks for your visit and valuable comments Idrish Ji...
ReplyDeleteWell, this is all my original work, all written by me only... Hope you have find them worth reading for once...
Do visit again...
@ Reema Ji..
ReplyDeleteWow... Third comment from your side...
Its really a pleasure to find you on my Blog...
Thanks once again.. Do keep visiting and inspiring me...
@ Jagdish....
ReplyDeleteIts never easy for me to thank you for your kind gestures and the wonderful friendship we share.
Thanks a lot... for everything... :)
Bekhabar hai chaand sudh leta nahi humari .........
ReplyDeletegreat :)
@ Sandesh... Thanks Again... :)
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ReplyDeletebahut umdaa.. aapka likhna bhi & gosh ! the layout is so very beautiful... i just loved it
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ashwini Ji..
ReplyDeleteActually I am just in process of shifting from Wordpress Blog to Blogger..
Hope to see u soon again here, after this maintainance work finalizes.. :)