Uski baatain sun kar mujh ko, waqt laga kuch thera saa,
lekin un meethi baaton main, pyar chuppa tha ghera saa....
main bhi hath tham leti uska, lekin sanson per hai phera saa,
jo bhi ho un meethi baaton main, pyar chuppa tha ghera saa...
raat mila woh sapno main, kuch paresha, kuch hairan saa,
keh key gaya wo aaisi baatain, jinmey pyar chuppa tha ghera saa...
phool khil gaye is jeevan main, pehley tha jo viraan saa...
aaisi meethi baatain thi woh, jinmey pyar chuppa tha ghera saa....
As usual hamari princess ne bhayut aacha likha hai.....Keep the gud work coming.......Hum aap ke aur poems and sher padhna chahte hai....
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Gum
Thanks Kulbhushan... :)
ReplyDeletevery beautiful and meaningful.. ya yu kahe ki aaj jo huaa vahi kah diya Shikha aap ne... good keep it up
ReplyDelete@ Rachna Jain...
ReplyDeleteI am glad you like it.
Just learning from my experiences, and a line of comment is always helpful in improving myself. :)
Thanks a lot for your visit... :) Please Keep Coming..
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ReplyDeleteKeep it up shikha, it's really excllent
ReplyDeletewah wah kya khob likha hai aap ki in kavitaoo par itna dard itna pyar hai ki agar kisi dusman ko bhi suna di jaye to wo bhi dusmani bhul jaye
ReplyDeleteHmm.... nice one! Pretty good! Lucky the one .. for whom you wrote this! I just browsed through your post by chance.
ReplyDeleteBut main kuch aur sochta hu ... Ab kuch hamari bhi suniye!..
Waqt theher jaaye .. to samjhiye ishq hone ko hai
Dil na sambhal paaye ... to jaan lijiye kambhakt khone ko hai
Zaalim iss dil pe armaano ka koi pehra nahi hota
Gehraai pyaar ki apne dil mein dhoondiye,
Meeti baaton mein chupa pyaar kabhi gehra nahi hota!
nice yaar
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